Some say that rich countries should help poor countries with food and education disagree give reasons for your answer and include examples from your experience

Governments around the world are now investing a great deal in therapy for illnesses and diseases.

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, some people believe that it is better to solve the problem at

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ource by spending more on

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and prevention. I

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disagree with

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opinion. Analyzing

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of the government and civilians' responsibility will shed light on my point of view.

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, governments, of course, should be responsible for

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ealth care system. In reality, there are many examples worldwide that huge public investment in building modern hospitals and equipping cutting-edge machines in diagnosing and treating illnesses. Only by spending on

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highly-cost innovation, can the government provide strong enough treatment for fatal diseases like heart stroke, cancer,... which are now increasingly common.

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makes clear that spending a great amount of money on taking care of the

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society is one of the government's obligations.

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, I believe that we, as civilians, play the most significant part in educating ourselves and preventing ourselves from absolutely avoidable diseases. I would like to cite some information that

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have learned from Ted talks show on Youtube that despite governmental strategies on

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education and high taxation in cigarette industry the main reasons behind serious common illnesses

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as lung cancer, diabetes, heart stroke are our physical inactivity, unhealthy diets and smoking habit. These behaviours which are definitely dependant on ourselves are

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and leading us to the hospital in the future.

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to say, the

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promotion actually falls on our hand rather than governments. In summary, budget distribution for treating illnesses and diseases is an inherent part of governmental operation and citizens are at the core in protecting themselves.

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, great public spending on medical service is compulsory and reasonable. In the future, I firmly believe that governments worldwide are likely to remain

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bigger spending because illnesses and diseases may become more serious and widespread.