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Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are some good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Wild animals are the most important part of our eco-system. Some opine that they should be confined in zoos while others think that it is important for them to be kept in
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I would delve into both these views and
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Firstly
, some people are of the opinion that as wild animals are getting extinct, it becomes important to protect by keeping them in zoos.
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 that, people know about different species when they visit zoos.
On the other hand
, keeping wild animals confined in a closed
environment
 will not give them a good exposure of the real
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. Many breeding programmes have been unsuccessful and has resulted in the death of the species.
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anda breeding programme was quite unsuccessful and has resulted in
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eath of panda.
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, whenever people visit the zoos they try to take pictures and come close to the animals. These can irritate the species and
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 agitate them by creating abrupt behaviour patterns in them.
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ignificant effort would be required to maintain zoos by taking appropriate care of the habitats. In my honest opinion, I opine that animals should be kept in
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ild
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 of keeping in zoos. These can give them space to live and enjoy the natural
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. To recapitulate, though some feel that it would be beneficial if animals are kept in zoos. I feel that animals will feel safer and secure if they are kept in
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 and we should not try to disturb the natural ecosystem.
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