Write a letter to your local council to tell him that the road in front of your house is damaged. In your letter include a.Tell him your name and where you are living b.Describe the problem c.Tell him what you want him to do for you
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Abhilash living in house number 40, Palm Islands. The objective of
this
letter is to bring to your notice that the street in front of my villa was excavated 2 weeks back for the installation of water pipes is kept open ever since. This
open trench has become really dangerous to pedestrians and vehicles alike.
What worries me the most is the children's park situated right opposite this
trench and there is an accident waiting to happen if the problem is not addressed promptly.
I want you to inspect the site at the earliest and make arrangements to close the trench at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
AbhilashSubmitted by rathan6886 on
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Try to provide a specific action for the council to take, such as suggesting a timeline for when you would like the trench to be filled.
coherence cohesion
Consider providing a bit more detail in each paragraph to fully develop your ideas, which will improve the logical structure.
task achievement
The letter is clear and concise, addressing all the necessary points.
coherence cohesion
The structure of the letter is logical, making it easy to follow.
task achievement
The tone is appropriate and polite, which is suitable for a formal letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite