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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to Orr work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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A common opinion is that people are learning foreign languages in
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 to find more
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 opportunities and for travelling purposes.
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, some people argue that it is not always the case
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 and that there are other reasons involved in
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 trend.
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 essay will discuss both views and will provide my personal opinion. On the one hand, most of the time people learn
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foreign
 languages for travelling purposes or to increase
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 prospects. In
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 to make their travelling experience more special and easier, people decide to learn
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necessary
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 and the basis of other languages.
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 will allow them to have direct contact will local people, get involved with the culture and perhaps save some money. When it comes to
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, learning foreign languages might wider
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 prospects.
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, if English is one of the main requirement in a
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 position, people will start learning
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language
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 in
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 to have more chances.
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, people who aim to find a
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 in an English country do not have other option but to learn English beforehand.
On the other hand
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, there are more reasons why people start learning other languages. In the scientific field, most of the time, articles and researches are
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written
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 to understand and study it, the students need to learn
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language
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.  Another reason why people might learn
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oreign
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 is because of love. Often time, people fall in love on the internet, they meet people from other countries and
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, they need to talk the same
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 to communicate and understand each other. A recent survey
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conducted
 in Australia has shown that a
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minority
 of people were learning foreign languages because of their partner background. To conclude,
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 the main reason to learn
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oreign
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 is usually for travelling or work purposes, there are still a lot of people who do
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 with other purposes. In the future, I believe that people will be more
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 to learn
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language
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 as we are going to be in a higher degree of globalization.
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