These days most people prefer not to leave in rural areas. Task: What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in rural areas?

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In recent times, it is
agured
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argued
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that many individuals prefer to leave in the cities
instead
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of residing in the villages due to a lot of reasons. Access to farm produce is one good
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why certain folks decide to stay in the rural areas;
however
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limited job prospects is a strong detrimental effect. On the one hand, some folks
perfer
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prefer
residing in the villages because of easy access to fresh farm produce.
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has been proved to be
benefical
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beneficial
to good
health
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as they eat less refined and
convinent
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convenient
meals.
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my father relocated to the village
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ew years ago on the bases of impacts fresh foods will have on his
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and surprically
this
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proved to be true as his doctor references it at
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lightest opportunity. Clearly
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this
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had a beneficial effect on my
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health
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and aided in managing the quality his intake since
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ntake of
crubs
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crabs
clubs
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have been linked to
nurmerious
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numerous
health
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challenges
such
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as
health
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dieases
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diseases
and obesity.
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,
this
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is one of
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asic reason a lot
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folks choose to stay in the rural area.
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, leaving
in
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the
country side
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countryside
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offers limited job opportunities. Due to the fact that
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most
inductries
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industries
and organisation are found in in the major cities.
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, people in
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rural areas are limited to tedious means of
liveihood
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livelihood
such
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as farming.
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, I spent two years searching for
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ource of living in my hometown but I gained employment with sundry foods limited
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ew months after moving to Port Harcourt city. Evidently, staying the rural area curtails the chances an individual stand on a reasonable
jod
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job
offer.
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, it is a strong
disadvantages
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of leaving in the
country side
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. In conclusion, a lot of people prefer leaving in
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major towns rather than residing in the villages. Staying at the less developed towns could
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tremendous advantages since it gives the public access to fresh raw material from the farms,
nonetheless
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, limited access to favourable work prospects is a very big turnoff.
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