These days most people prefer not to leave in rural areas. Task: What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in rural areas?
In recent times, it is my father relocated to the village folks choose to stay in the rural area.
agured
that many individuals prefer to leave in the cities Correct your spelling
argued
agreed
instead
of residing in the villages due to a lot of reasons. Access to farm produce is one good merits
why certain folks decide to stay in the rural areas; Change to a singular noun
merit
however
limited job prospects is a strong detrimental effect.
On the one hand, some folks perfer
residing in the villages because of easy access to fresh farm produce. Correct your spelling
prefer
This
has been proved to be benefical
to good Correct your spelling
beneficial
health
as they eat less refined and convinent
meals. Correct your spelling
convenient
For example
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,
f
ew years ago on the bases of impacts fresh foods will have on his Change the article
a
health
and surprically this
have
proved to be true as his doctor references it at Change the verb form
has
s
lightest opportunity. ClearlyAdd an article
the
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,
this
had a beneficial effect on my dads
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dad's
dads'
health
and aided in managing the quality his intake since i
ntake of Add an article
the
an
crubs
have been linked to Correct your spelling
crabs
clubs
crumbs
nurmerious
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numerous
health
challenges such
as health
dieases
and obesity. Correct your spelling
diseases
Therefore
, this
is one of b
asic reason a lotAdd an article
the
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of
On the other hand
, leaving in
the Verify preposition usage
apply
country side
offers limited job opportunities. Due to the fact thatCorrect your spelling
countryside
,
most Remove the comma
apply
inductries
and organisation are found in in the major cities. Correct your spelling
industries
Thus
, people in the
rural areas are limited to tedious means of Remove the article
apply
liveihood
Correct your spelling
livelihood
such
as farming. For instance
, I spent two years searching for s
ource of living in my hometown but I gained employment with sundry foods limited Add an article
the
a
f
ew months after moving to Port Harcourt city. Evidently, staying the rural area curtails the chances an individual stand on a reasonable Add an article
a
jod
offer. Correct your spelling
job
Hence
, it is a strong disadvantages
of leaving in the Change the noun form
disadvantage
country side
.
In conclusion, a lot of people prefer leaving in Correct your spelling
countryside
the
major towns rather than residing in the villages. Staying at the less developed towns could Remove the article
apply
be offer
tremendous advantages since it gives the public access to fresh raw material from the farms, Change the verb form
offer
nonetheless
, limited access to favourable work prospects is a very big turnoff.Submitted by ebyxander on
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