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The charts below show temperature and rainfall in Equatorial climate and Mediterranean climate. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show temperature and rainfall in Equatorial climate and Mediterranean climate. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given graphs below demonstrate the
rainfall
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 and
temperature
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 that take place in the Equatorial and Mediterranean
climate
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 throughout
a
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the
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 year. Starting with
equatorial
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the equatorial
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climate
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, the
rainfall
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 is higher in the month of January, November, and December than in other
months
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 that are accounted to be more than 200 cubic
millimetres
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,
while
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 in the rest of the
months
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, it is below 200 cubic
millimetres
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. Turning to the
temperature
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, it remains the same in all the
months
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 , accounting for almost
25-degree
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15 degrees
Celcius
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 and exhibits a minor increase between
the
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April and July
that is
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 noticed
around
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at around
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 27 degrees
Celcius
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. Moving
further
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 to the Mediterranean
climate
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, the
rainfall
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 is the highest in the month of January and December, which is noticed to be 150 and 170 cubic
millimetres
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, respectively.
However
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, from February to November, it is considered to be
below100
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below 100
 cubic
millimetres
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. The
temperature
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 that increases rapidly to over 25 degrees
Celcius
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 in the month of August decreases by 15 degrees
Celcius
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 in December.
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, the Equatorial
climate
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 is higher than
in
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the Mediterranean
climate
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 in terms of
rainfall
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 and
temperature
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 over a period of 12
months
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.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rainfall, temperature, climate, months, millimetres, celcius with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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