All education and healthcare should be funded by the government and free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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ducation and free healthcare should be available for all humans being and should be supported by politics. I am absolutely convinced that all social welfare which is providing all human needed resources must be free of charge in order to have sustainable and satisfied society.
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, it is really important to take care and pay attention to our population and to be considered that not everyone could afford the well-paid school or medical assistance which are extremely expensive nowadays. This
is because in each country there exist both societies living in poverty and a medium level of living which are not able to let themselves pay for the schooling or the health-care. For instance
, the Russians have faced some medical issues recently so that they have been devastated when the power assumes that all medical staff should have been apart from the funding due to unstable economical situation.
Another point to consider that funding all social services are not of the budget because of the hard times for the government. Also
, some leaders of their countries are based on other needs such
as defence. That's the reason why some countries are lack of opportunity to provide enough money for either discipline's department or
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For example
, the military country such
as Iran hasn't got any ambitious to enhance their social structures, so they are not making this
an essential part of people's lives into consideration.
To conclude, It can be said that all these vital parts of our life such
as education and healthcare are needed and the ministry must take charge of providing all human needs. I stick to the point that all people are entitled to have equal opportunities in order to be happy.Submitted by andrew_jpg on
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