Some people believe that it is best to accept a situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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There are certain beliefs among the people, some says that comprehending the state of unsatisfactory is often useful to maintain a calm mind, &
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I believe that responding to difficulties & mishaps helps them to understand the root cause of the problems &
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it helps to prevent them in near
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. There will be a lot of up & downs would come in one individual's life & not willing to accept the failure in terms of unemployed, crisis & other calamities can cause mental stress, will eventually create depression, anxiety.
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, football players get specific training to perform in every
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there will be the events in their careers where they may experience out in performance
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or they might not get a good start in the tournament as they expect it would be so, in those conditions they need not regret on the present condition,
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they should have their attention on where they lack & accept their state of being
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can have a good track record on their blind spots & can use them to improve
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, just contemplating loopholes & problems caused are not gonna change the whole course, folks must try to figure where they actually slacks should collect possible data from the previous misdoings & attempt to resolve the
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by taking respective measures, it's been said that being dissatisfied with the current
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doesn't make one's liability but doing nothing about it does.
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, it's clear that we must seek for the possible solutions so, we are not only resolving them but apparently preventing it from happening
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to it,there is a common principle taught to every mechanical engineer around the globe is do the mistakes no matter how many attempts it would take, one fine finished product is far better than thousand false actions. To summarize, sometimes it is good to give up on plans that wouldn't go according to the way we thought for peaceful mind &
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I believe that taking prompt steps in rectifying
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prevents people to commit the same mistakes in ahead
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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