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some people believe that it is best to accept a situation

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Introduction
Life
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 is all about learning new things each and every day.Some individual
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 that it is
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est idea to accept your conditions whatever it is about
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inancial crisis or not
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interesting
 job .While
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other
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 believe that you need to give
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ight back against your situations.
This
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 essay will discuss both
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 of views and why we need to
imrprove
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improve
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Body paragraph 1
Many people do not have
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ourage and capability to stand against the problems.People
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 a fear in
thier
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their
 mind that will lose everything
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 they have if they tried to do anything new and they are not enough capable to learn something new in
life
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 .
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,
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mostly
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most
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 people
donot
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do not
don't
 change their jobs whole
life
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 not because they love their jobs
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 they do not want to take the risk of
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loosing
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losing
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 a job.
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they want to survive their whole
life
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 with
s
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ame amount of salary .Fear in mind of loosing, make assure
person
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 to accept the problems.
Body paragraph 2
Fighting against the problems helps to improve the
circumtances
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circumstances
. no one is perfect from
begining
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beginning
 , everyone needs to start
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the
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ction and show
courgae
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courage
 for
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etterment of
life
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.More a
person
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 learn in
life
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 more he
become
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becomes
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knoweledgble
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knowledgeable
knowledgable
 and perfect in
life
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.
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, Bill Gates fail five times to get a position in
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the
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ompany but he
stick
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 with courage and
start
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 learning new skills which helps him to make
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orld richest
person
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.More you try more you will improve your current situations because
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 makes
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p
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erson perfect.
Conclusion
In conclusion,fear and courage
stops
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p
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erson to accept situations but
i
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I
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 believe
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p
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erson need to try and learn each
everyday
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.Because
person
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learn
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learns
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 from their mistakes more you show faith more you can tackle your problems.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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