Some people believe that students should be taught international news as a subject at school. Others feel that this would be a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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There has long been several confront comments about whether should

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tudent need to be trained about international current affairs or it just time-consuming futility if they are discussing

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its at institutional education. In my own perspective, approaching to the news not only a radical and

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rights, which has been officially declared and affirmed in human rights.

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, it could be limit to some extent cause some pieces of news or information

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re unsuitable to adolescent.

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paper is going to discuss both sides of

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ssue and cast light on it. On the one side, when students are able to catch up with the official daily news on TV and e-newspaper, which have been censored strictly and fit up with their age group.

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is one of the most utility and confident sources of information toward learning and entertaining in the eye of parentals’.

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, being informed with pressing issues around the world; they might

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tep into a small scale to reduce the particular issue. Global warming,

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, is closely correlated to the survival of humanity. Throughout creating more online campaign,

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to propaganda about the consequence of global warming towards human beings and natural habitat, along with raise funds, students can support national botanical institutions or zoos to gain more budgets as well as financial aids to maintain and rescue endangered species on the verge of extinction. On the flip side, some kind of macro and micro fields

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as economy, diplomacy, philosophy, politics are overwhelming the awareness ability and knowledge with the innocent mindset of pupils.

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, the widespread coverage of disheartening news about suicide and violent or harassment have been proved that

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to those kinds of bad news for a long time can be damage and bear in their mind a detrimental impact and exert/create negative emotions and brutal views about world and life.

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, in educational terms, children should be stimulated to take part in more outdoor and social activities, which help them improving and enhancing social interaction, gaining and gathering more academic, practical knowledge and energetic to adapt with future career and job market. To recapitulate, based on the benefits of international bulletins up-to-date, students can be gathered useful information to serve their study and career as well as

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conduct flexibility postures and gestures without any hesitation under no circumstances.

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, with the broadly and speedily/promptly conveyancing of news

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for the time being, it should be censored and carefully selected to suitable with youngsters.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

419 words

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Some people believe that students should be taught international news as a subject at school. Others feel that this would be a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Multicultural societies, where people of different groups live together, bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Tourism is one of the fastest growing industries and contributes a great deal to economies around the world. However, the damage tourism can cause to local cultures and the environment is often ignored. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many things that were used to be done at homes by hands are now being done by machines does this advantages or disadvantages

It is often argued that it is difficult to get children to read. Why do you think this is? What measures could be taken to encourage children to read more? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

you would like to invite a foreign friend to visit you for your birthday write a letter inviting your friend in your letter tell your friend about your birthday explain how much the visit would mean to you suggest that your friend stays at your house for the visit