Some people believe that having a conversation on a mobile phone in a public or crowded place should be banned. Others feel that we should be able to talk wherever we like. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Mobile technology is flourishing by leaps and bound and give them access to do the various task from wherever an individual is available. Speaking on the cell to anybody has become a part of our movements and does not have any adverse effect in a crowded place.

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, it has been argued by a section of people that interacting on handset may result in some unexpected consequences and should be ban with some suppression. I will shed some light on both the views and

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only will give my opinion. To embark on, there are several reasons why we should not ban using a cell phone in public spaces.

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, the invention of mobile is mainly to get in touch with another person sitting anywhere in the globe whenever needed, irrespective of the surrounding a one is present. Due to fast pace of life, a person spends maximum time of his or her day in travelling by using public transport, these time a human being can utilise in interacting with the parents or anyone whom they have not interacted for long.

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things help their feelings brim over with happiness. Adding to

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, by applying stoppage on using a mobile phone in presence of mass can restrict in getting any important tidings and cost our security. To Illustrate, during IPL the security department interact with each other on phone in the availability of thousands of people to ensure everything is safe.

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, operating on a handset in throng can pass on the imperative information which is confidential, to anyone in a mob.

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, life can be tracked by anyone through social media only by knowing the name though the conversation heard.

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, it has been identified by the government official that the 30% of the total crime of blackmailing is only because of knowing very few information by the culprit,

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as a person's name by hearing their conversation standing

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to him in public places. To conclude, I strongly opine that by prohibiting in using handphone in horde can cause resentment in an individual's feeling and may cost one's safety.

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