Write a letter to your professor outlining why you are not satisfied with their course. In your letter: – write the reasons why you are not satisfied with the course – request to change your course – indicate what course you want to take instead

Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you about my discontentment with the subject I am attending in your college, and requesting you to permit me to change
this
. I enrolled for the subject "Database Management" which has started on 20th November 2020. Yet, I attended three lectures of
this
course
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your campus
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and
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dissatisfied
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with the method of learning. The fact is, I found the
course
a bit
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theoretical
, while I was told it would be more practical during admission.
Moreover
, the contents of given lectures are quite fundamental, whereas I admitted with the thought of having
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knowledge as mentioned in the
course
curriculum. After analysing carefully, I selected to admit in "Database Administration"
instead
of my ongoing one. Mention able that, the duration and the fees are
same
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for both subjects. In
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circumstances, I am requesting you to allow me to shift into the
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course
so that I could be
benifited
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benefited
with the learning. I am looking forward to hearing
fromyou
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from you
. Yours faithfully, Taslima
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