Many societies has its homeless people some people think that the best way to help them is give them money. To what extent do you agree?

The number of people who lives in the streets has increased across the world. The majority of the citizens thinks that

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problem can

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it if the government brings

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financial assistance to the homeless community.

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I agree that more incomes could aid people who are suffering

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nightmare, I think that it is crucial the Social department develops more helpful and long-term solutions. Many people have been forced to live in the streets because they failed to solve their economic situation. If

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scene, people plus

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poor family

support

and

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mental problems, the conditions are more dreadful and drove to some people to make

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ard decision

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homeless.

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, the initiative about

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funds for the citizens less worthy can be help them in many aspects

such

as they could be able to buy groceries and personal items or take the extra incomes to save them for emergencies.

On the other hand

, another part of the community without

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in

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awful scenario because they are having addictions, mental, or social disorders which were the main reasons of

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their family and home place. In

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case, the benefit of

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an amount of money is not reasonable due to that they have the basic knowledge to use it.

For instance

, it is well-known that

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addiction

addicts

without control or

support

are no able to control their

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instincts

, they

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have not the maturity to be

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responsible

with money.

Hence

, most of the homeless population with addiction issues has ended to use the money in alcohol or illegal drugs. If

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help does not have a solid plan which included professional and family

support

, rehabilitation, and self-development courses, it would be a catastrophe.

In other words

, any member of the society in

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complex reality needs a hand to get up again. To conclude, I agree that homeless groups should

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economic assistance.

However

, they

also

need the

support

of their community and family because it is essential to tackle

this

problem.