People across the world are more similar than they are different. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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more integrated,

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, the distance and dissimilar among the people of multi-national and regions around the world are narrowing down. Personally, I partially agree towards the aspect that more matching characteristics have been witnessed from people in

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lobe, even though we have different nationalities and identities and

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opic and cast the light on pressing issue. On the one hand, thanks to the proliferation of globalization and more invention of advance information technology. people in any spot around the Earth are able to shares the same point of view, especially, life mottos. Indeed, directing easily and exchanging ideals and cultures with people from different areas and continents via social network platforms that cause them more closely and gradually immersed in their ideology. Obviously, the interference and cross-view among people who care

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the same topic because of globalization, more likely to make people vibrant and assimilation.

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, youngsters in Eastern and Western are concern about the fashion trend and style. They are freely initiative branch-new forms of clothes, which mingling the Eastern classic along with the radical and modern of Western-style. On the flip side, despite the fact that people around the world are sharing some same identical and international events like World War,

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, there is some exceptional and unique in history as domestic conflicts or history of

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ndustry, agriculture in our nation which not similar to others countries. To exemplify, in terms of the history of Vietnam, there has been a ton of domestic conflicts and aggressive assault of foreign countries in the historical timeline of the nation. It is

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convincing evidence to prove that Vietnamese are not only have the wholeheartedly patriotic

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have the intense union spirit, in combat with any stronger enemies to defend their national border. To sum up, the exchanging culture of people from different countries and boundaries could put people together,

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, the cultural identities of people are unable to duplicate and will be preserved to show the unique and respect in their culture and historical milestones.