Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
All of us have kept hearing that, if we don’t have a good job, we will not have the “Perfect” life that we want. For
this
reason, we grow up focused on Linking Words
work
and win, but most the people in the world cannot have a balance of life, leaving aside the most important which is “Live”. Working long hours have more advantage or more disadvantage, Use synonyms
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will be covered in the essay.
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First
, it is undeniable that working long hours will ensure people stay more stable and even richer financially. Linking Words
However
, it is really important to have Linking Words
time
for leisure activities as makes people have peace of mind and destress. Use synonyms
For example
, researches confirm that 65% of people that Linking Words
work
too much don`t have a healthy life, getting stressed and anxious. Use synonyms
Hence
, those people don`t have Linking Words
time
for their families causing lack of presence and education of their children.
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Second
, people that Linking Words
work
too much, can not have good Use synonyms
work
production, wasting their times, and costing more money for the companies. Use synonyms
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time
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on the other hand
,companies would prefer have only one employee as they don`t need to pay more money. Linking Words
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, employers force their employees to Linking Words
work
long hours.
To conclude, it is undeniable that working long hour will make people richer financially. Use synonyms
Moreover
, will not generate excellent production at Linking Words
work
, and an unhealthy lifestyle for them and their families, for these reasons people that Use synonyms
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too much have more disadvantages than advantages.Use synonyms
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