Some believe that advances in technology are increasing the gap between rich and poor while others think the opposite is happening. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

There emerges a significant debate amidst those who consider that the gap between wealthy and poor people is on the increase in the frame of cutting-edge

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, whereas others

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ifferent point of view. I am of the opinion that

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widening the living standards of individuals who are at the middle tier and lower; a gap between poor and rich is far often the case notwithstanding. As

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advances, there arises

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minimum level of need. The main reason

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the wealth inequality is that almost everybody should have cell phones and an internet connection.

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, people from countries, where wages leaves much to be desired in terms of the well-being of individuals, ought to obtain a device or even devices to be able to study or maintain their work processes.

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, it normally brings about/gives rise to the monetary burden upon them and turns out to be taking loans. From

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pposite perspective, more opportunities

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out of how

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advances and I agree. It is essential nowadays to keep abreast of the latest life features as well as the times.

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, as

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features go forward, there

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reat deal of devices become more affordable for people.

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can be exemplified by taxi drivers who

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for Uber or Lift companies

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since they are required to possess cell phone at least as well as having an internet connection so as to easily discover where is the nearest location of a client. In point of fact, they have at least two paramount advantages – conserving a time and making

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pretty well money from

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matter, thereby narrowing down a gap amongst poor and wealthy individuals to some extent. In conclusion, I tend to favour the position wherein as

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advances it ensures poor people more alleviative road so as to yield a good revenue (assured income?). Not only is it for their own good in terms of well-being or welfare, but it

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allows them to be abreast of the new features in their work field.