Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are many reports around the globe that have reported animals

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due to global warming.

As a result

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many

ecosystems

have been dying.

Although

, some people argue

that is

not required to invest heavily on

protect

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wild animals because

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limate is

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ever-evolving

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and expensive to protect. I strongly disagree with them because animal caring can save

ecosystems

and improve our agricultural productivity. There is no doubt that It is expensive to protect

wild life

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. In order to protect them, governments and individuals need to spend valuable resources that could be invested in many

others

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urgent matters

such

as education and healthcare to name a few. Unfortunately, resources are limited and

decision makers

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need to be aware of the benefits and the costs of every

alternatives

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. The idea of spending on wild animal care could be left many young students without education and many persons without a healthcare appointment.

For instance

, more than thirty

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of the Costa Rica budget is destined to care

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animals and national parklands.

Conversely

, Costa Rica shows one of the lowest life

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in all over the world. As a consequence, governments need to be aware of the trade-off of very decisions and find out the

the

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extensive benefits of

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the environment. Protecting animals can save

ecosytems

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ecosystems

already in danger which could bring hope to many countries which are losing productive lands. By enforcing wild animal caring, agriculture zones will be able to thrive during the expected global

garming

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gaming

warming

events in the upcoming future.

For instance

, Costa Rica suffers floods and water scarcity during the winter, but the impact of

such

events are remediated due to they have strong

ecosystems

which are supported by many species. Every specie has a role to accomplish in its ecosystem,

thus

ecosystems

are more

resilent

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resilient

to any global warming events. In

this

way, the main benefit of

this

policy is that the impacts and the cost of

such

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climate

crisis events are diminished by avoiding losing thousands of square

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of productive lands. In conclusion, I

completly

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completely

disagree with the claim

that is

not necessary to invest

on

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protect

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wild life

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because it is expensive.

Conversely

, I think that animal caring can save

ecosystems

and improve our agricultural productivity.