Music is played in every society and culture in the world today. Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays,

music

is broadcasted everywhere all over the world. Some people think that it just has advantages for people and societies, while others believe that it can be some drawbacks towards both. In

this

essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and give my own point of view. On one hand, there are many benefits of listening to

music

,

such

as to change the emotion, and

also

some of promoting the

song

with positive meanings.

For example

, when people listen to relaxing

music

, it stimulates our brains to release some endorphin which makes us happy.

As a result

, we are benefiting from listening to

music

.

Moreover

, it can be seen that governments make an educational

song

to promote some positive thinking.

For instance

, we can hear some songs that encourage people to recycle or join volunteer work.

This

is a good way to encourage citizens to take part in

the

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social responsibility.

On the other hand

, there are

also

some drawbacks of influence people and societies, like a sad

song

with negative meanings and

this

also

towards societies. The evidence is some reports said that when people sad, they are more likely to listen to some sad

song

.

This

is a vicious circle because when people unhappy and listen to a sad

song

, they become more dejected.

In addition

, if many people listen to

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song

who live in the same neighbourhood,

then

they are more like to become depressed

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towards the whole community. In conclusion,

although

there are some drawbacks of people who listen

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sad

music

,

such

as

this

makes people might become unhappiness that influent to the societies.

However

, I strongly believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages by enjoying relaxing

music

and some

song

to promote positive meanings. We can

also

limit to listen to sad

music

by ourselves.