Prevention is better than cure. Researching and treating diseases is too costly. So, it should be better to take preventive measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Being ill might be the most difficult thing in the world, and even it may result in death. A recent controversy revolves around the question of prevention is better than cure. The analysis contained within the following paragraphs will confirm
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assertion and provide detail information. Most of the time, prevention blocks intervention that means there is no need for
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. One supportive argument states that
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comes with side effects.
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of taking a painkiller, people should take precautions, and so they remove side effects. Hospital costs,
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and a toothbrush only cost 10$ for a person, but, if the cavity occurred it cost at least 100$. Yes, these points above mentioned above offer strong arguments, but
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ast possibility to get cancer again.
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that, some contagious virus has no
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as AIDS or covid-19.
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illness has no vaccine. People should take into
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a simple way which is
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ask and social distance. In conclusion, of course
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some sickness
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above, and we should not underestimate these opinions.As I stated above, there are a lot of supportive arguments.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proactive
  • preventive measures
  • lifestyle diseases
  • public health
  • healthcare expenditure
  • cost-effective
  • chronic conditions
  • early detection
  • immunization
  • health promotion
  • risk factors
  • non-communicable diseases
  • disease surveillance
  • preventive diagnostics
  • health literacy
  • universal healthcare
  • primary prevention
  • secondary prevention
  • tertiary prevention
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