Some people think that people should be given right to use fresh water as they like. Others believe governments should control toughly over the use of fresh water. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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water

, is one of the most valuable natural resources, as it sustains human life. Unfortunately,

this

problem of

water

shortage is not new, but a portion

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people today assert that it is a must to ensure the

use

of

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water

is under the strict control of

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overnment. Due to the higher demand of

water

for industrial manufacture, daily life, and

further

preventing the destruction of

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ater-depended ecosystem,

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water

which is theoretically deemed as the renewable natural resource will, if consumption at present rates continues, run out one day. What is worse, the abusive

use

of

water

is common to see on in the farmland, in factories and the household.

Therefore

, supposing that

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overnment takes no actions to deter

this

water

crisis, what would happen in the future? Would human beings be able to

use

water

as they like? In order to combat the deteriorating situation, it is believed the authority is supposed to regulate the maximum quantity of

water

consumption in industrial production; adopt high-technology aimed at recycling used

water

in farmland.

On the other hand

, it is fair to say people do have the right to

use

fresh

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water

as they want. The main reason lies in that the restriction of

water

use

might lead to poor sanitary conditions and the spread of diseases.

In addition

, it lowers people’s living standards and causes a lot of

inconvenience

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.

For instance

, showers are only available in at certain hours of a day; flowers can only be watered once a week. In summary, from my perspective,

although

the budget for advancing

water

-saving technique aggravates

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overnment’s financial burden, it is their obligation to tackle the issue. Apart from the measures to control the consumption of

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water

and

moreover

, large-scale educational campaigns should be held to

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the awareness of the public need in saving

water

in public.