Some people think that people should be given right to use fresh water as they like. Others believe governments should control toughly over the use of fresh water. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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, is one of the most valuable natural resources, as it sustains human life. Unfortunately,
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problem of
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shortage is not new, but a portion
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people today assert that it is a must to ensure the
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is under the strict control of
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overnment. Due to the higher demand of
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for industrial manufacture, daily life, and
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preventing the destruction of
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ater-depended ecosystem,
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which is theoretically deemed as the renewable natural resource will, if consumption at present rates continues, run out one day. What is worse, the abusive
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is common to see on in the farmland, in factories and the household.
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overnment takes no actions to deter
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crisis, what would happen in the future? Would human beings be able to
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as they like? In order to combat the deteriorating situation, it is believed the authority is supposed to regulate the maximum quantity of
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consumption in industrial production; adopt high-technology aimed at recycling used
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in farmland.
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, it is fair to say people do have the right to
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as they want. The main reason lies in that the restriction of
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might lead to poor sanitary conditions and the spread of diseases.
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, it lowers people’s living standards and causes a lot of
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.
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, showers are only available in at certain hours of a day; flowers can only be watered once a week. In summary, from my perspective,
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the budget for advancing
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-saving technique aggravates
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overnment’s financial burden, it is their obligation to tackle the issue. Apart from the measures to control the consumption of
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and
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, large-scale educational campaigns should be held to
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the awareness of the public need in saving
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in public.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Human right
  • Resource scarcity
  • Economic productivity
  • Ecosystem
  • Biodiversity
  • Equitable distribution
  • Monopolization
  • Public health
  • Sustainability
  • Government regulation
  • Hygiene
  • Water quality
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