Levels of depression and antisocial behavior in children have increased dramatically in modern societies. This situation has led many people to believe that childhood itself is in crisis. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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It is believed that in the modern world the level of kids' sadness and introverted people has significantly risen,
hence
the majority of people consider the beginning of teens crisis. I strongly disagree with
this
statement, because nowadays the young generation has a lot of opportunities to communicate and
also
no reasons for depression due to the wealth of toys they might be given.
To begin
with communication between people. It is clear that today we have a powerful connection tool
such
as the Internet, where all generations including children might not only meet a new friend but
also
keep in touch with his peers. To illustrate, there is plenty of communities in the webspace with people from around the globe, who assemble to discuss movie, book, or computer game which now is must have to play in.
Furthermore
, in America, one man has created an online cinema for kids. The
second
evidence is a broad choice of toys and activities.
In other words
, we live in a peaceful, prosperous world, where each child could find whatever he likes
such
as a big radio-maintained car, a new smartphone, or even speech able dog.
Furthermore
, recent research shows that outdoor activities are helpful in fighting depression, owing to parents and a baby getting closer when they are spending time together playing with a new kite they've boughten. In conclusion, despite the occasional bad mood and closed at
first
sight behaviour, there is nothing to be afraid of. In my point of view, the child nowadays has all the opportunities to live happily and enjoy his life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prevalence
  • societal pressures
  • academic demands
  • technological influences
  • parental neglect
  • family structures
  • mental health issues
  • economic inequality
  • community support
  • well-being
  • heightened awareness
  • improved diagnosis
  • advancements in mental health treatment
  • social support systems
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