There is a problem in the road outside your house. Write a letter to your local councilor. In your letter, introduce yourself, explain what the problem is, and tell the councilors what you would like to be done.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing about the problems on the

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outside my house. My address is 271 Halloween Street, Los Angeles, USA. I chose your councillor because of the positive review and reputation of responsibilities. The

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has been disturbed.

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problem not only the neighbours to have major accidents but

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, I do not use my parking because

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problem banned the parking's door.

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accident I tried to help people because it reduced my stress level and helped

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, I request already you try to construct

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. I believe that the councillor should overcome with difficulties by sending their employer to repair the

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and investing more funds in alternative modes of transportation and pedestrian zones. Thank you for your assistance, I look forward to hearing from you soon. yours faithfully, Mohsen Ijbari

jingelbingFri Nov 15 2024

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Coherence and Cohesion

Improve logical flow by organizing the letter into clear paragraphs with one main idea each.

Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure a smoother transition between ideas or sentences to enhance understanding and flow.

Task Achievement

Be more specific when explaining the problem, such as the nature of the disturbance causing the accidents.

Coherence and Cohesion

Your greeting and closing are polite and appropriately structured for a formal letter.

Task Achievement

The tone of the letter is suitable and respectful, which is important for formal communication.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

151 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Councilor – an elected representative for a local area who can address community problems.
Pothole – a depression or hollow in a road surface showing asphalt degradation.
Congestion – overcrowding or traffic blocking efficient movement.
Hazard – a danger or risk on the road that needs attention.
Resolution – a formal expression of intention or remedy to solve a particular issue.
Impact – the effect of a particular action or problem.
Community – the people living in an area collectively.
Urgency – the need for prompt attention to a pressing issue.
Remedy – a means of counteracting or eliminating something undesirable.

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