Some people consider price as most important thing to consider when buying a product (such as a cell phone) or a service (e.g. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?

It is thought by some people that price tag of an article or
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service is the most essential thing to be taken account while buying them. While
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I agree that the cost of
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roduct ought to be considered to avoid unnecessary spendings, the requirement of the same has a crucial role to play. Price of the product is certainly something that people should look into.
This
is mainly because it is a matter of one's budget. In a
decision
to buy,the features of the product are secondary and the central idea is whether we can afford it or not in fact and even is it required at that point of time? Mobile phones,
for instance
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in
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case, one should compare the prices of the cell phones so that there would not be any frivolous spending and maximum benefits with minimum pricing can be bought rather than wasting money.
Therefore
, in these type of articles, pricing should definitely be considered before making a
decision
. Having said that the cost of the service does not hold any ground if it is a life and death matter according to my perspective.
This
is mainly during medical emergencies one may encounter and here ignoring the cost of treatment would be a wiser
decision
else the
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sufferer
may lose his life.
For example
, carrying out a dialysis process over a kidney patient require
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uge amount to be spent,
however
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atient can not be placed on stake.
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such
health-related conditions, overlooking the expenditure would be
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ational approach to follow. To conclude, pricing unarguably has
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vital importance in a
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process but it should be a careful
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deliberation
after analysing the options in list, need of the same and urgency of the situation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • budget
  • prioritize
  • manage finances
  • high quality
  • affordable
  • effective
  • durable
  • essential services
  • efficacy
  • compromise one's health
  • long-term savings
  • durability
  • efficiency
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