Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?

There are numerous reported cases of

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crimes by former prisoners after they are released. Many countries try to tackle

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they have not solved it yet. The number of causes of

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situation is overwhelming,

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it is difficult to find the best solution.

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with, the most important issue, that former prisoners are struggling with, is social stigma. Criminal records are successfully

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these people to find a job,

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they are forced to get involved in illegal work again.

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the employers' fears are not baseless, it is impossible for criminals to try to resocialize without a steady income.

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, the prisons are often overcrowded depressing places and

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the inmates tend to forget how to live in society.

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, the USA prison system is considered one of the main reasons

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an inability to change for criminals. People there are treated worse than animals and

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they start to act like them.

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violence among inmates is deemed to be common and ordinary. Under

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conditions, people do not have a chance to focus on their inner change as they spend every moment on surviving. Fortunately, the number of possible solutions exist to eliminate

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problem.

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, the government can implement rehabilitation programs for prisoners

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as constant psychological counselling. Admittedly it would increase the costs of maintaining convicts,

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it is necessary to reduce the crime rate.

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, another crucial element in

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process is changing the attitude of society towards former criminals,

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employers. They could reconsider hiring somebody despite their criminal record so they could earn their livelihood.

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, the former convicts require emotional support after being released. To conclude, in spite of

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any causes of the problem, there are ways to solve it.

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of making their lives harder, we should take care of the convicts' mentality so that they would not reunite with their past.