These days, problems with pollution are becoming worse, particularly in large cities. What are the reasons for this and how can this be solved? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays
mega cities
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are more polluted than before,which causes lots of problems.The growth in the
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of urban
duwellers
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dwellers
due to migration ,and
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increse
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increase
in the
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of industrial activities,cause some issues,and governments should take some steps to solve them. There are several reasons why the amount of air
pollution
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have increased .
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most of
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ural
duwellers
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dwellers
have immigrated in order to meet a better quality of life
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as having decent universities and up-to-date recreational facilities.
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growth in population
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in rising the
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of vehicles and human activities.
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,statistics show that one car will be used more in exchange for every 5 migrants.
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,the
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of factories is increasing due to industrial evolution which is one of the primary
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of CO2 emission.
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increase
in the human and
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activities,the problems with
pollution
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are going to be worse than ever. To solve the mentioned problems government should encourage people to live in
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ountryside and impose some incentives to business owners to rebuild their firm out of cities.
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,
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regimes
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should reduce taxes in small cities in order to persuade urban residents to move to
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areas which will lead to population distribution.Beside states can sale fields ,which are located out of big towns, with low prices,so as to encourage factory owners to relocate sources of air
pollution
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. To conclude,people and businesses are the main reasons for
pollution
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and unless the government take some steps,increased amount of contamination in air will surge.
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