It is sometimes said that ‘travel broadens the mind’. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?
Some people believe that travel makes our
mind
widely. I completely agree with Use synonyms
this
statement and will give reasons below.
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First
, Linking Words
traveling
can give us various and new experiences that we have not known for our whole life. Let's say you are a westerner who lives in Europe. You would feel everything familiar around you Change the spelling
travelling
such
as cultural traits, traditions, religion but when you travel to Asia, you will see everything is different. Linking Words
Traveling
is a good way to learn new things. Learning new things can always make us have rich knowledge. I think Change the spelling
Travelling
this
can support travel makes our Linking Words
mind
broadly.
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Second
, Taking a break is significant as well in our life. We can get our Linking Words
broaded
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broad
broadened
mind
through Use synonyms
traveling
to Change the spelling
travelling
the
Change the article
apply
nature
. Use synonyms
For instance
, It doesn't feel refreshment in the city how much time we have as a rest. Linking Words
For example
, Imagine Linking Words
about
Verify preposition usage
apply
the
Remove the article
apply
nature
like Use synonyms
m
ountain, river, sea. There is no other sounds but birds or water. I believe everyone has the memory of staying in Add an article
a
the
Change the article
apply
nature
. Use synonyms
This
gives us Linking Words
p
eaceful Add an article
a
mind
. When we have space in our Use synonyms
mind
, we can think something more clearly and Use synonyms
think
more widely than before. I can tell Change the verb form
thinks
this
reason Linking Words
also
helps to say that our Linking Words
mind
is Use synonyms
broaded
through Correct your spelling
broadened
broad
traveling
.
In conclusion, there are two reasons why I think our Change the spelling
travelling
mind
could be Use synonyms
broaded
through Correct your spelling
broadened
traveling
. Change the spelling
travelling
First
one is our Linking Words
mind
can be widely learning from other country's traits through Use synonyms
traveling
and Change the spelling
travelling
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econd one is going to Change the article
the
the
Change the article
apply
nature
can give us the peaceful Use synonyms
mind
that can give space in our Use synonyms
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make us think widely.Use synonyms
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