It is sometimes said that ‘travel broadens the mind’. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

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Some people believe that travel makes our
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widely. I completely agree with
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statement and will give reasons below.
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,
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can give us various and new experiences that we have not known for our whole life. Let's say you are a westerner who lives in Europe. You would feel everything familiar around you
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as cultural traits, traditions, religion but when you travel to Asia, you will see everything is different.
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is a good way to learn new things. Learning new things can always make us have rich knowledge. I think
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can support travel makes our
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broadly.
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, Taking a break is significant as well in our life. We can get our
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through
traveling
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to
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nature
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, It doesn't feel refreshment in the city how much time we have as a rest.
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, Imagine
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like
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ountain, river, sea. There is no other sounds but birds or water. I believe everyone has the memory of staying in
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nature
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eaceful
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. When we have space in our
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, we can think something more clearly and
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more widely than before. I can tell
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reason
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helps to say that our
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is
broaded
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broadened
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through
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. In conclusion, there are two reasons why I think our
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could be
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broadened
through
traveling
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.
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one is our
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can be widely learning from other country's traits through
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and
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s
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econd one is going to
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nature
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can give us the peaceful
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that can give space in our
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make us think widely.
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