It is sometimes said that ‘travel broadens the mind’. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

Some people believe that travel makes our
mind
widely. I completely agree with
this
statement and will give reasons below.
First
,
traveling
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can give us various and new experiences that we have not known for our whole life. Let's say you are a westerner who lives in Europe. You would feel everything familiar around you
such
as cultural traits, traditions, religion but when you travel to Asia, you will see everything is different.
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is a good way to learn new things. Learning new things can always make us have rich knowledge. I think
this
can support travel makes our
mind
broadly.
Second
, Taking a break is significant as well in our life. We can get our
broaded
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mind
through
traveling
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to
the
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nature
.
For instance
, It doesn't feel refreshment in the city how much time we have as a rest.
For example
, Imagine
about
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the
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nature
like
m
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ountain, river, sea. There is no other sounds but birds or water. I believe everyone has the memory of staying in
the
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nature
.
This
gives us
p
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eaceful
mind
. When we have space in our
mind
, we can think something more clearly and
think
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more widely than before. I can tell
this
reason
also
helps to say that our
mind
is
broaded
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through
traveling
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. In conclusion, there are two reasons why I think our
mind
could be
broaded
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through
traveling
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.
First
one is our
mind
can be widely learning from other country's traits through
traveling
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and
s
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econd one is going to
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nature
can give us the peaceful
mind
that can give space in our
mind
make us think widely.
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