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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign languages is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign languages Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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A few people argue the sole reason
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 acquiring a new
language
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 is to move and work abroad. Others contradict
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 saying that there is much more to learning a new
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 than just travel and work. Immigration has seen an exponential rise in recent times. As people continue to move to better countries, they face the challenges to meet the requirements of their new homeland and one of those requirements it their new country's native
language
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. Canada, as an example, has a
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 immigration system and a significant number of points are awarded based on the
language
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 proficiency of the applying individual. The
world
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's best Universities are located in English speaking countries and almost all of them require applicants to undertake a
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 proficiency test
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 as IELTS in order to be eligible to apply. People who have a background in arts and culture,
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, say that learning a new
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 can have other reasons
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 as the need to see the
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perspective
 of people speaking that
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. Experts say that no single
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 can be perfectly translated
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 another
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 ; some meaning is eventually lost in the translation process. Another reason for learning a new
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, cited by some, is to feel confident in one's own ability. Learning a new
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 can be a daunting task and people can enjoy a degree of satisfaction when they are fluent in a new
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. In my opinion, everyone should be up for a challenge to learn a
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 other than their own. It opens doors both professionally and personally. Our
world
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 is headed towards a phase of borderless economies where intercultural interaction will get more common and distances between various ethnic groups will get shorter. Acquiring a new
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 will not only help us develop the ability to see the
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 through the eyes of others but
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 help forge the way to diverse workplaces throughout the
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