Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A growing

number

of people believe that species’ extinction

such

as greeneries and animals is today’s primary environmental concern.

Such

losses are definitely harmful to the environment,but some other factors

such

as pollution are argued by others to be more serious problems with which I agree. On one

hand

,the decrease in the

number

of wild animals and the destruction of vegetation have detrimental effects on the natural world.on the other words,illegal hunting and poaching on one

hand

and cutting trees due to housing ,

on the other

hand

,will have disturbed the ecological chain in long-term which means that the distinction of each type of alive species little by little results in the reduction of other kinds which might lead to the destruction of wildlife.

For example

,since gazelles are the prays for lions,by the reduction in the

number

of them ,lots of lions which are fed with them will die afterwards.

Moreover

,as trees are the main source of O2 emission in the air,cutting down them will affect climate .To illustrate more, statistics show that the increase in the

number

of trees in the

last

10 year has resulted in a 30% growth in pollution and affected seasonal patterns.

Therefore

,all endangered types of living organisms should be cared

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due to the role which they play in nature.

On the other

hand

,due to

ndusrtrial

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industrial

revolution and the invention of cars ,the numbers o factories and vehicles which are the main sources of air contamination,have

rose

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and caused some irrecoverable problems to our surroundings.Co2

emmited

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emitted

owing to

such

activities is considered to be a major problem of human beings and the nature in which they are living.To clarify more

such

greenhouse

gass

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gases

not only directly leads some types of organisms ,living in the earth,to be killed,but

also

causes climate change which indirectly threat their lives and both destroy

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nvironment.

For instance

,

datas

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data

illustrate that by increasing the use of fossil fuels for

factorie

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factories

factorise

and car uses,2 type

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of

animals which were in danger of species,have been distinct

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in my

country. To conclude,there

is

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different points of view about the reason why the

environmet

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environment

is disturbing,ranging from reduction In biodiversity to industry-related steps which I think is the most vital issue that our natural environment is suffering from