In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, there has been a dramatic increase in

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oncentrate on studies rather than there in life experience like exploring the world. there are a number of reasons why

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think the drawback of

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trend outweigh the benefits. The young people now are going through high pressure which

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them hard to decide what they actually wanted to become.

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there would not be any break in high school study and university studies, Because of

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I haven't got any knowledge how the outside world works and what to be considered. Later I have been out of my home country for my Master

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what the environment looks here was too different than which I experienced there. notwithstanding the aforementioned rationalisation, keeping more focus on

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and rather than working is not without its concerns. the primary one stems from the fact that by overlooking the gap between higher and university studies