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People nowadays send text messages more frequently than they talk the phone. Do the advantages of texting outweigh the disadvantages?

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In the present era, people are sending
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 messages to their love ones and they do conversations on messages
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 of
phone
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 calls. There are various reasons for using a
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 for
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 messages rather verbal calling. I believe that
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 messages have more advantages.
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, it has
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 some downsides which can be avoided. On the one hand, there are a lot of benefits of doing conversations by texting on mobile phones.
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, nowadays the telecom companies are giving a huge discount or cheap rate for
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 messages.
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, some individuals do texting to convey their messages because they feel shy or uncomfortable to say that on
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 calls or face to face meetings.
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, usually, the employees do drop a
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 to their bosses for taking a day off or other reasons because they feel uncomfortable to say it verbally on calls.
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 but not least some people are busy in work
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 as driving or attending an official meeting and so on and they are unable to attend calls,
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, other people drop a message for them.
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, whenever they have free time than they can read it.
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, there are some draws backs of
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 messages. Texting consumes a lot of time typing.
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, people avoid long discussion on messages.
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, people write incorrect or short spellings in their
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 which affects their academic and professional life.
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, according to the survey of Uninor Telecom, usually, young employees write incorrect spellings in their emails because they are habitual of it because they are doing too much texting on phones. To summarize, masses do
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 messages for their convenience and it’s cheaper than
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 calls. There are some draws backs which can be solved according to situations. I think the benefits of
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 messages are outweighing on disadvantages.
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