Nowadays people are trying to have a successful career and happy family life at the same time. What problems could this create? How can people overcome them? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your personal knowledge or experience.

It is undeniable that a lot of people today want to build an excellent
career
and to have a strong family at the same time.
However
, in
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they could have a fiasco.
This
essay will discuss a possible solution of how to find a balance between family and work.
First
of all, it is essential to identify a problem. The majority of people who are trying to have a
career
and a good family at the same time
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as a result
don't have anything at all, or at least just one thing from
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list. And we have a lot of examples of it. Take some celebrities
such
as Eminem or James Cameron
for instance
. Both of them have
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exsiting
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existing
exciting
careers.
However
, as we know it is impossible to argue that their family life is happy.
Moreover
, other artists who chose a family have
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uch less successful
career
. There is only one solution
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this
issue. If someone in the family wants to build a
career
the other should understand
this
, stay at home and take care of their children. In
this
case, it will create a perfect opportunity to have a good balance between a
career
and a family. I have a few friends with
such
experience and I definitely can say that they have
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in their job and
a truly good families
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a truly good family
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. In conclusion, it
it
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is a huge problem in the western world for people to choose between work and family.
However
, it should not
to
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be forgotten that it is possible to solve
this
problem and to not have any issues with it at all
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Balancing
  • Burnout
  • Juggling responsibilities
  • Neglecting
  • Unrealistic expectations
  • Dissatisfaction
  • Setting realistic goals
  • Priorities
  • Fulfillment
  • Effective time management
  • Allocation
  • Reducing stress
  • Seeking support
  • Coping mechanisms
  • Balanced life
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