Nowadays people are trying to have a successful career and happy family life at the same time. What problems could this create? How can people overcome them? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your personal knowledge or experience.

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It is undeniable that a lot of people today want to build an excellent

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and to have a strong family at the same time.

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, in

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they could have a fiasco.

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essay will discuss a possible solution of how to find a balance between family and work.

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of all, it is essential to identify a problem. The majority of people who are trying to have a

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and a good family at the same time

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don't have anything at all, or at least just one thing from

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list. And we have a lot of examples of it. Take some celebrities

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as Eminem or James Cameron

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. Both of them have

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exsiting

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, as we know it is impossible to argue that their family life is happy.

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, other artists who chose a family have

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uch less successful

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. There is only one solution

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issue. If someone in the family wants to build a

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the other should understand

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, stay at home and take care of their children. In

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case, it will create a perfect opportunity to have a good balance between a

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and a family. I have a few friends with

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experience and I definitely can say that they have

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in their job and

a truly good families

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a truly good family

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is a huge problem in the western world for people to choose between work and family.

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, it should not

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be forgotten that it is possible to solve

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problem and to not have any issues with it at all

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Balancing
Burnout
Juggling responsibilities
Neglecting
Unrealistic expectations
Dissatisfaction
Setting realistic goals
Priorities
Fulfillment
Effective time management
Allocation
Reducing stress
Seeking support
Coping mechanisms
Balanced life

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Nowadays people are trying to have a successful career and happy family life at the same time. What problems could this create? How can people overcome them? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your personal knowledge or experience.

Your opinion

Scientists advise people to lead a healthy lifestyle, but most people continue with unhealthy activities. Why do you think it is and what can do with it?

There is big number of people who wish to live in big cities what are there advantages and disadvantage

In future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statemtent?

Many people used distance- learning programs to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the benefits as much as attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree?