Nowadays people are trying to have a successful career and happy family life at the same time. What problems could this create? How can people overcome them? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your personal knowledge or experience.
It is undeniable that a lot of people today want to build an excellent they could have a fiasco.
career
and to have a strong family at the same time. However
, in this
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,
This
essay will discuss a possible solution of how to find a balance between family and work.
First
of all, it is essential to identify a problem. The majority of people who are trying to have a career
and a good family at the same timeAdd the comma(s)
, as a result,
as a result
don't have anything at all, or at least just one thing from this
list. And we have a lot of examples of it. Take some celebrities such
as Eminem or James Cameron for instance
. Both of them have an
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exsiting
careers. Correct your spelling
existing
exciting
However
, as we know it is impossible to argue that their family life is happy. Moreover
, other artists who chose a family have m
uch less successful Add an article
a
career
.
There is only one solution of
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to
this
issue. If someone in the family wants to build a career
the other should understand this
, stay at home and take care of their children. In this
case, it will create a perfect opportunity to have a good balance between a career
and a family. I have a few friends with such
experience and I definitely can say that they have success
in their job and Replace the word
succeeded
a truly good families
.
In conclusion, it Correct the article-noun agreement
a truly good family
truly good families
it
is a huge problem in the western world for people to choose between work and family. Delete the pronoun
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However
, it should not to
be forgotten that it is possible to solve Change the verb form
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this
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