more and more children are spending more time inside house .is this positive or negative development ?

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the way of human lifestyle. Nowadays more and more pupils spend most of their

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inside

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ouse watching tv or playing video games.

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dverse effect on children lifestyle.

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social interaction is almost lost. Children are spending their whole

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utside world .

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, it is often seen that nowadays children are not seen in playgrounds as they used to be before

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they spend their free

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ouse .Playgrounds and parks are seen empty now.

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, pupils do not remain any interest

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meeting new people and make new friends .

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less social interaction will become

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ajor concern for children in future as they are not aware of

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children are becoming lonely.

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suffering from many

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health-related problems . Remain in house long hours and no physical activity will become the reason of many mental health-related problems.

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,migraine ,week eyesight and decreasing learning ability are major problems in most

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hildren .In recent research done at Harvard University shows that

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forty five

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of school students are suffering from diseases like migraine, week eyesight and

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ajor reason behind is watching long tv and not

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in physical activities.

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many of health-related problems occurred in children . In conclusion, staying in houses for

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not only become the reason of children less interaction with

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bring so many health-related problems in children life.

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certain steps should be taken by parents to not making

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worse.