Many people work hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantage?

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, they become have not much

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to spend on leisurely activities. In

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advantages and disadvantages. There are no doubt people have become more focus on their works in order to pay the living cost expenses. These trends have an impact on our

life

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which made some drawbacks, like to lost work-life balance and lost the

time

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to be with family.

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, many people need to reply

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e-mail even during their holidays or weekends.

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cause them

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o not have

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for leisurely activities. In a long run, they might feel stressful and depressed or eventually have some mental problems.

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, if they concentrate on their work even on their vacation which makes them do not have any

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to share with their family.

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will damage the family's relationship.

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, there are some advantages, like increasing income and

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a

sense

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of

achievement

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from the jobs.

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, people can get more salary or bonus money if they work hard.

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can make them have the ability to pay the living cost or have a high quality of life.

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, they can

gain

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a

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achievement

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. The best example is if they spend more

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on their works,

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might increase the achievable ratio.

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, they can reach the goal and

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. In conclusion, there are some benefits of people who spend more times on their jobs, like to draw a

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of

achievement

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and

gain

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more bonus or money.

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, the disadvantages

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advantages because they might lose the

time

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to stay with their family members and

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might cause the mental health issue.