Many people work hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantage?

Nowadays, people busy with their works.

Thus

, they become have not much

time

to spend on leisurely activities. In

this

essay, I will discuss

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advantages and disadvantages. There are no doubt people have become more focus on their works in order to pay the living cost expenses. These trends have an impact on our

life

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which made some drawbacks, like to lost work-life balance and lost the

time

to be with family.

For example

, many people need to reply

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e-mail even during their holidays or weekends.

This

cause them

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o not have

time

for leisurely activities. In a long run, they might feel stressful and depressed or eventually have some mental problems.

Moreover

, if they concentrate on their work even on their vacation which makes them do not have any

time

to share with their family.

This

will damage the family's relationship.

On the other hand

, there are some advantages, like increasing income and

gain

a

sense

of

achievement

from the jobs.

For instance

, people can get more salary or bonus money if they work hard.

This

can make them have the ability to pay the living cost or have a high quality of life.

In addition

, they can

gain

a

sense

of

achievement

. The best example is if they spend more

time

on their works,

this

might increase the achievable ratio.

As a result

, they can reach the goal and

gain

a

sense

of

achievement

. In conclusion, there are some benefits of people who spend more times on their jobs, like to draw a

sense

of

achievement

and

gain

more bonus or money.

However

, the disadvantages

are outweigh

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advantages because they might lose the

time

to stay with their family members and

also

might cause the mental health issue.