Many people continue to use cars and motorcycles even though they know that they are bad for the environment. Why is this? What can be done to reduce the use of these vehicles?

Continuing using cars and motorbikes can negatively
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the environment,
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, many people don’t want to change these familiar means of transportation. There are several reasons for
this
.
Firstly
, while in developing countries, motorcycles are very popular as they are cheap and easy to buy, in developing countries, people can buy cars with affordable prices or purchase it with comfortable payments over a few years. Owning a private means of transportation is very convenient for people’s travelling needs. Especially, in recent years, they
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become a tool to earn money when Taxi and Ride-Hailing Apps like Grab, Be, Gojerk
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been developing rapidly with millions of users.
As a result
, many people tend to spend more time on the streets after their full-time job with their vehicles to do an extra job as a shipper or driver.
Besides
, the poor quality of public transport services
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people unsatisfied. Nobody wants to experience a journey in an overcrowded bus and risk their
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to get potentially pickpocketed. In order to reduce emissions from motor vehicles and improve air quality, there should be governments’ interference with traffic laws,
for example
,
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setting
up a curfew time for commuters to travel with their own vehicles, improving the
quailty
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quality
of public transports and offer more options of travelling
instead
of buses
such
as hired bikes and high-speed trains. Collaborating with influencers to create
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wareness-raising campaign on environmental protection could be a very good idea because
inflencers
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influencers
easily spread the messages to communities thanks to the support of various digital and social media platforms.
Enviromental
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Environmental
pollution is multinational problems. There will be no effective way to make things better if nations don’t work together for
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global benefits.
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