Some people say that supermarkets and manufacturers have a responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging on products they sell. Others believe that it is the consumer’s responsibility to avoid buying products which have a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

Over-packing is one of the serious problems which causes numerous harm to

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nature. There is an ongoing debate

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whether the producers or the consumers own the responsibility for reducing the use of plastic. In my point of view, both parties are indispensable in

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cases. On one hand, unnecessary packing

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made by supermarkets and manufactures. Many merchants’ belief, outlook design is a vital highlight of a product.

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, snacks which made in Japan usually have individual packing as

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roduct can be

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as a

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for travellers. The ignorance

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reen issue cannot be solved unless the manufactures’ awareness

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. Beside, over-packing always happened when supermarkets’ only concerns are toward customers’ convenience and

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why a banana in sole-packing can be found on

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tore.

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usiness sector and people believe that it is impossible for people to make change without producers’ cooperation. On the others’ hand, customers are acting a dominant role in

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and more likely to determine

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usiness model.

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of buyer always

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the suppliers’ decessions. There are many global

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organized by social activists related to

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issue. Serval group of participants for some fast flash movements will “return” extra packing to the supermarkets. Meanwhile,

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reen organization always call for complaint mails from nationwide to manufacturers.

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to rely on the power of

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or pressure made by a group of

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customer

, rather than waiting for merchants’ active action. To conclusion,

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people blame

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sectors for being the

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of over-packing, individuals’ participation

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equal importance in related solution. For the good of

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nvironment,

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society should never put their expectation on one side as there is a need to

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problems

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two sides.