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Some people say it is important to keep your home and workplace tidy, with everything else organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

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The psychologic aspect of each person is variable and everyone is different, making it one of the most attractive parts of the human being. Each of us has a different obsession, methodology and way to organize the environment where we live. During my left, I met a huge amount of people with
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arious mentality, and even though they look very messy, they are successful in their life and have achieved several goals. Sometimes, I defined myself has a very organized person, not only if everything is not in his position my quality work is way worse compared when everything is tided up. As my experience, I always try to tide up the item which is all over the
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It could distract me, making the study time longer than what it should be.
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, the left items on the
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 would accumulate if I don't put them away.
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, I am not used to keep more than 4 pens on my
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 even if I need to fill out a colourless image with different pencils. In conclusion, keeping your
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 as much free as possible would improve your study and productivity.
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, if a person is not acting in
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • organised
  • clutter-free
  • productivity
  • mental clarity
  • efficiency
  • professionalism
  • first impressions
  • ergonomics
  • aesthetically pleasing
  • compulsive neatness
  • functional space
  • minimising distractions
  • systematic arrangement
  • time management
  • work-life balance
  • streamline
  • feng shui
  • optimal performance
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