Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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issues have always been a long-term

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for many governments, and

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has caused even more concerns these days with the ever-growing

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of people suffering from modern diseases

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as obesity or stress. While some people believe that the key to solving

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a

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lies in the

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of sports amenities at the public’s disposal, I would side with those who are of the opinion that more measures are needed. Investing in more sports facilities seems to be a feasible solution for some.

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might be because the more equipment there are, the more convenient it is more for people to practice sports.

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, the increasing

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of equipment can act as an incentive for people to exercise more regularly.

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, the

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of public

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is a complicated one that stems from a variety of factors

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as poor diet and work-life imbalance, and the lack of exercise is just one of them.

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, buying more sports equipment alone might be too simplistic a solution. Clearly, if the

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of public

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is to be resolved, more measures will be required.

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, the rapid development of the fast-food industry is to blame for the increasing

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of people opting for

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kind of food on a regular basis as an alternative to nutritious home-cooked meals, and

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, imposing a higher tax on

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unhealthy food can curb the

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of consumers and encourage people to switch to healthier options

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.

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, if people suffer from stress or other

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conditions

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of a lack of work-life balance, they should learn to prioritize their time more effectively.

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means that they should seriously reflect on the way their time is spent and make a list of their top priorities at work and home, thereby optimizing their time to achieve their goals while still being able to balance their life. Seemingly, a change in lifestyle is essential in solving the

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. In conclusion, addressing the issues of public

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via increasing access to sports amenities alone is not enough. I believe that other methods should be introduced and both the governments and individuals should join hands to make it happen.