You recently stayed at a hotel and found the service unsatisfactory. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter: Explain the problem with the service. Describe how this affected your stay. Suggest what you would like the hotel to do as compensation

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Respected Sir Or Madam, I hope you are doing well. I have been a loyal customer of your hotel since 2014.

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Saturday, I stayed in your hotel and encountered some disturbances. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about your staff services. The room was not clean and found a lot of cigarette butts scattered around the room. So, I called the room service for cleaning but he came after 3 hours of waiting and his responses were rude and aggressive. I was

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in your hotel to attend an exam.

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unpleasant

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, I was not able to concentrate on the exam.

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, I failed the exam due

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bitter experiences. I kindly request you to give a formal warning to your staff about his aggressive behaviour

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, I would expect a refund of 1500 rupees for my inconvenience. Please look into

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matter immediately

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it might affect your profits. I look forward to your prompt response Yours faithfully, Santhoshkumar

ksanthosh701Fri Feb 14 2025

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coherence

Consider using clearer paragraphs for each main point. For instance, separate the details about the service issue and its impact into distinct paragraphs.

task achievement

Your letter has a clear purpose and appropriately addresses the issue at hand, which contributes to a good overall response to the task.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

166 words

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