Learning to play team sports is an important part of a child's education. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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The benefit of playing

team

sports for future develops children undeniably.

Although

, not all children will be wanting to play in them. I am sure that there are other ways to get the same benefits;

also

I believe that children do not get positive effects if

team

sports games do not like them. Teamwork in any game is very important especially if

this

game like it. In the

first

place,

team

sports very well for developing physically a kid special when they too carried out in the open air,

also

to help become young people more independent and develop friend quality.

Moreover

, they develop important skills

such

as teamwork, the ability to win or cope with defeat.

Last

but not least advantage, children can spend time fun that very well for their mental health.

However

team

sports are not the only way to gain these benefits. Some children like individual activities

such

as biking, hiking, or swimming. Not all children enjoy playing

team

sports.

Thus

, when children are forced to take part to play

such

sports is can be a disagreeable experience. In the future for young people, teamwork or

team

sports can associate with unpleasantness.

Accordingly

, when a young person has a bitter experience participating in

team

sports he can refuse. In conclusion, the benefits of playing sports are tangible, but not for everyone. It makes no sense to impose on children what they don't like. The most

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way of learning for any child is the support of his parents and encouragement to be better at what he loves.

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