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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Many divergent views exist about the language barrier in a foreign state. A great number of people, including myself are of the opinion that
this
 has social and practical issues. In the following paragraphs, I will explain the rationale for my viewpoint on the matter. The primary reason I believe is that it can lead to frustration in society. It goes without saying that when migrants do not understand native tongue,
then
 he fails to understand local culture and custom from any perspective,
such
 as purchasing or commuting in the city.
This
 makes him lonesome and leads to a social problem. My university
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, Tina is a shining example of
this
. Tina, who came from Nigeria to learn Islamic education in Pakistan, tried hard to understand the local culture
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 and people’s attitude.
Consequently
, she returned back to her country without completing her course. Not only does
such
 a problem contribute to isolating people, but it
also
 affects the well-being of the individuals. It stands to reason that local people prefer to interact with
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ocal.
This
 phenomenon becomes more obvious when immigrants are unable to find a job for their survival just because of dialect and suffer from practical problems. Unsurprisingly, a 2019 study conducted by a group of researchers at the University of Ottawa, Canada found that highly skilled immigrants in Canada
such
 as doctors and lawyers, have been living hardships and forced to do layman due to language barrier. To sum up, I hold to the opinion that before migration to any country, people should make their best effort to learn the language of
this
 particular country as
this
 can eliminate many social and practical problems
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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