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Some people say that it is. A waste of time to learn literature such as novel and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #waste #time #literature #novel #poems
It is irrefutable that learning is crucial to match the pace of today’s world, which is helpful not only for growth in
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arrier but
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, to improve communication skills. Reading published work is wastage of time believed by
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egment of
society
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However
, I am
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 to think opposite direction. I would like to explicate it at length in the paragraphs to come. The
first
 school of thought claims that creative writings can make a revolutionary
change
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 life by changing their way of thinking towards
society
.
For example
 by reading positive books a person will become more optimistic and can
change
 their lifestyle in a positive manner. Owing to
this
 a part of
society
 will
change
 their lifestyle by changing their mental vibes; lead to calmness and a healthier world.
In addition
, reading literary text regularly can enhance vocabulary, grammar and communication skills of individuals, which will help them in their carrier growth.
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 who is learning printed work on
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egular basis has more fluent communication skills as compared to others, revealed in a survey conducted by
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 university.
Hence
, people are becoming more knowledgeable and receiving more carrier opportunities. In conclusion,
literatures
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literature
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 are
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dominant
 to make
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ositive
change
 in
society
, whether it is for knowledge or for personal grooming.
Society
 must start reading more novels and poems for themselves to make a positive
change
 in their lives.
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