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In the future, nobody will buy printed paper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree

#future #nobody #paper #books
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It is an irrefutable fact that
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nternet plays a significant role to learn new material in today' time. It is believed by some that in upcoming years people will avoid to
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purchase
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 because these all will
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nternet at free of cost. I agree with
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 related to studies or
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 knowledge information. Which allowed folks to save money from books or newspapers.
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 are many websites which are
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deny
 that fact people will use these online methods rather than buying
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Nowadays
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applications
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ext morning to get knowledge about current affairs. To cite an example, In many rural or hilly areas they hard copy of books or other
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 are not
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easily
 and people at that region
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they can get it.
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disagree
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traditional
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lder
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folks
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internet
. So, may they still like to buy
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 the modern era we should change with the time.
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