Learning to play team sports is an important part of child’s education. Do you agree or disagree? Include relevant examples from your own experience.

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up of the children with cooperative abilities is important. Participation in a
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contributes
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feature of the nurturing. Personally, I support any
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activity for the children as well as I agree that
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sport
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is substantial. There is a little doubt that people have to cooperate in order to manage their lives, projects and interpersonal relations. The ability to interact can be trained during
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sports activities as football, volleyball and
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kind of
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sports. It is important to explain for the children that not only leadership is important in the reaching of success but
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discipline and strict fulfilment of the role
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erson has in the
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. Obviously, that leadership is
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ignificant thing and
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eam plays
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etermine the personalities who able to be a leader.
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, children who came to the football club to start their
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begin the competition between each
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. In the training
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process coaches determine who is
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eader and who is
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player
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. Meanwhile, others may leave
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idea to be a
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player
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and go to
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individual sports.
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, people who used to train
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individual sports
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may be a good
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because they trained to be responsible for their results. Evidently, that
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liable person is a valuable member for any role in the teams as a
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as a leader.
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,
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erson who played
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or
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boxing is extremely serious in the responsibility for his or her outcome. Acting in the frame of
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rules
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people
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may be successful. To conclude, I would like to point
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that any
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sport
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activity
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up children as a disciplined people. Especially,
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sports insert special cooperative features in the children personality formation.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social skills
  • communication
  • cooperation
  • teamwork
  • discipline
  • commitment
  • punctuality
  • physical development
  • endurance
  • healthy competition
  • coping with losses
  • sense of belonging
  • community
  • self-esteem
  • leadership
  • strategic decisions
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