International travel has many advantages to both travelers and the country visited. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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we have some disadvantages too like if someone facing any issue where they travel to another place.
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at the same time city provide occupation as a guide to someone.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural exchange
  • Exposure
  • Broadens horizons
  • Increases understanding
  • Promotes economic growth
  • Tourism
  • Educational opportunities
  • Personal development
  • Self-confidence
  • Environmental impact
  • Carbon footprint
  • Disease transmission
  • Economic disparities
  • Cultural misunderstandings
  • Clashes
  • Security risks
  • Safety concerns
  • Balancing
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
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