Some people say that the main environmental problem is a loss of particular species of animals and plants. Others say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both views and give your opinion

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nvironmental problem is one of the most problems in modern society. Some people believe that particular species avoid environmental problems
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as trees or some animals. I totally agree with
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perspective. But, there are other significant problems for the
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, some people do not recycle their garbages.
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essay will discuss what is the main problems of environmental problems. On the one hand, as we know, a lot of trees are good for
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pollution.
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, people try to protect trees and mountains. In recent research shows, a small size room with smoke, around ten adult trees can change the
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condition of the room in a few days. Trees are not only good for
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they prevent erosion when heavy rain or earthquake.
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, still, deforestation is
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because trees are very important for the
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, Unless people do recycle, it will lead to several environmental problems. The garbages which not recycle properly, these are just throughout everywhere even rivers, mountains or around people's houses. When I lived in Canada, there are only two options in garbage cans, recycle or garbages.
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recycling.
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, some people have to recycle for cans, glasses, plastics and papers. I believe that people doing recycle well can provide environmental problems. In conclusion, there are
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reasons for
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pollution. It can be loss of particular animals and plants
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or people's bad habits. In my opinion, we should protect particular animals or plants
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as trees because they are protecting
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pollution.
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, people have to try to protect the
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