Government investment in arts, such as music and theater, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or dis agree?

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In every year's budgeting, the Indian government is allotting some share of
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to the arts and
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is common in all the countries.Some feel that it is of no use to spend on arts
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as
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and theatre. I don't agree with
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argument, I feel that
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and theatre is
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a representation of one's
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and heritage and
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it should be preserved. It is obvious that we need to invest more in public services
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as increasing the number of schools, building more public toilets, building more hospitals and more.
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, we should not avoid preserving our arts.
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, if we failed to support the arts and
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development department with adequate funds,it will result in the decreasing trend of tourist attraction towards our country and a job loss of 15% of our population can happen. I will explain how going
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, In countries like our India, arts and
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attracts 60% of tourists than the other things. Foreigners come to visit places like taj mahal, Jaipur palace and most importantly, temples, which is
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a form of arts. Those historical monuments should be preserved. Adequate funds to corresponding departments will lead to safely preserve it.
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, As per the tourism department's data, tourism accounts for 15% of formal and 10% of informal jobs in our country. Consider a business,
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as a handwoven sarees in south India. The handwoven clothes which have a high demand for foreign nationals
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as America, Japan, UK and Canada.Though they don't wear it often, they are fond of wearing and flaunting it. Sales of
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types of dress materials account for 5% of southern India turn over, the Arts and
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department is procuring them directly from the weavers at a supporting price and selling it in the foreign markets through embassy and E-portals. Without
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und,they cannot procure it and maintain their website, which may result in the closure of
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business.
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, Indian
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especially Carnatic
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draws many foreigners towards India. They like to listen to the classical form of
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very much. Theatres in India are the most loved entertainment by 75% of the Indian middle class. Though we can hear many films earning in crores it doesn't fill the pockets all the artists. Only producers, distributors and some lead artists are benefitted from these films. The government of India is supporting those artists by providing pensions. If we stop funding to
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and arts, we will loose our classical
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and theatres, resulting in job losses and tourism
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. To conclude my point, Though funding for public services has to be increased, we cannot stop funding for
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, theatre and other forms of arts. They reflect our
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and heritage. In our system of
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we value the arts as equal to gods and we should not forget the
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associated with it. We can use the
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for spending on public service.
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