In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development??

In the world of globalization, people are concerned about themselves more and more from the past two decades,especially who are living in metropolitan areas. Whereas, believe that
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this
trend could have both positive and negative impact on the society which,
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will discuss
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. To commence with, there are plenty of reasons, why people are choosing to live alone.
first
and foremost, if people live alone
then
they have
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reedom to make their own decisions on how they live. To exemplify, some students and employees who want to abroad,because they
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develop their skill.
Besides
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they have to do everything themselves
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cooking, cleaning as so on and
this
causes an improvement to their independent skills. In
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totally
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positive development for
this
modern world.
In addition
, there are so many competitions in
such
kind of jobs and businesses. There might be some jobs which far from their home, so people have to move from there home as well as family and they have to live solo due to their job. Despite
this
,
this
trend will result in greater opportunities for their career growth. Live individuals will be able to migrate easily to those places where they get a better salary from their work.
On the other hand
, there are some reasons that it is a negative development for
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ociety. If people choose to live in alone they cannot understand the meaning of joint family and
also
it creates bad effects on the family relation.
However
, living solo creates loneliness and depression and
then
they cannot share their problems with their family. To sum up, the number of people living alone is increasing from
last
couples decades and
also
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ountry as well as society;
however
, it is
also
prominent that they meet their families once a month.
Submitted by Hardik Rathod  on

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