The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer.

In our modern world
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we are unable to survive without energy. We
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energy in our daily
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like coal, oil and natural gas. Coal, gas and oil are
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rimary
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and they are non-renewable. Our
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cycle is totally running out on it. I
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on
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xploration and development of safe alternative fossil fuels should be most important today. Fossil fuels
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ecomposition of dead plants and animals under the earth crust. It is made up of organic material and it was done
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illion
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ago. Today our modern demand is high but fossil fuels
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lack of supply. It has a
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impact on our
humans
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life
. Without
power
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energy hospital can not safe human lives. We can not our
life
cycle. We will face unemployment poverty and
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feminine
famine
. That all cause imbalance population. Fossil fuels
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also
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ause of global warming and
green house
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greenhouse
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effects. Due to fossil burning ozone layer is depleting. It is
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ause of skin cancer. It has
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ad impact on human health. If we kept increasing the
use
of fossil fuel our
non- renewable
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sources decreases. So that we should
use
alternative fossil fuels like wind
power
, thermal
power
, solar system,
hydro
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hydropower
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power
etc.
Now a days
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we
use
renewable source to global document. It should be our
first
priority.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • climate change
  • fossil fuels
  • safe alternatives
  • global priority
  • limitations
  • drawbacks
  • potential benefits
  • government
  • international cooperation
  • investing
  • research and development
  • challenges
  • obstacles
  • transitioning
  • individuals
  • businesses
  • adopting
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