Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. others, however believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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We represent our

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by being

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ideal member and behave

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with other members with equal respect and dignity. Generally, it is believed that parents can teach

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ability to their children.

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, it is suggested that

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is the best place to learn

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will discuss both sides of the

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share my opinion. Parents can be the best teacher for their children and teach them how to be

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ideal member of

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the culture and ritual of

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so they can give proper knowledge of how to being in it. Another reason is parents can give their child

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ability to contribute

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their

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, children can be a speaker and discuss both pros and cons of

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and resolve problems and make it more clean and respectful.

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can grasp from their parents.

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, by being so long in

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and known with all

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prospects

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of colonial they can be the best teacher for

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chool is a place where children can learn multiple skills and knowledge.

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are more focussed on academic and curricular activities.

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there are many different other classes along with academic to make their students

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can conduct seminars and teach their student by showing the mirror of

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, It is the best place to learn

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manners,

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chool can teach how to live with thousands of people in

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by making fruitful relations with them. They can

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increase the confidence in children so that they stand for

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society

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in every best and

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scenario. In conclusion, I believe that living in a

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parents can teach their children more accurately and in a proper way rather than

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chool which are focussed on many activities and not give particular guidance on

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

good members of society
teach
parents
schools
responsibility
values
respect
empathy
responsibility
formal education
citizenship
ethics
social responsibility
lead by example
role models
conducive environment
extracurricular activities
community involvement
collaborate
holistic approach

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