Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. others, however believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

We represent our
society
by being
a
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ideal member and behave
good
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with other members with equal respect and dignity. Generally, it is believed that parents can teach
this
ability to their children.
In contrast
, it is suggested that
school
is the best place to learn
this
. In
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will discuss both sides of the
arguement
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argument
and
also
share my opinion. Parents can be the best teacher for their children and teach them how to be
the
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ideal member of
society
.
For example
, parents, grandparents
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the culture and ritual of
society
so they can give proper knowledge of how to being in it. Another reason is parents can give their child
such
ability to contribute
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their
society
.
For instance
, children can be a speaker and discuss both pros and cons of
society
and resolve problems and make it more clean and respectful.
Such
abilities
a children
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children
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can grasp from their parents.
As a result
, by being so long in
society
and known with all
perspects
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prospects
perspectives
of colonial they can be the best teacher for
this
.
On the other hand
,
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chool is a place where children can learn multiple skills and knowledge.
School
are more focussed on academic and curricular activities.
For example
, In
school
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there are many different other classes along with academic to make their students
all rounder
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.
School
can conduct seminars and teach their student by showing the mirror of
society
.
For instance
, It is the best place to learn
the
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manners,
s
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chool can teach how to live with thousands of people in
society
by making fruitful relations with them. They can
also
increase the confidence in children so that they stand for
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society
in every best and
worst case
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scenario. In conclusion, I believe that living in a
society
parents can teach their children more accurately and in a proper way rather than
s
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chool which are focussed on many activities and not give particular guidance on
this
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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