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University education should be free for all students. To what extent do you agree or disagree

#university #education #students
Education
 plays
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ital role in our
life
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 and it will support
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ountry’s economy. Nowadays many countries offering free higher
education
 for promoting
education
 for culture and
also
 encourage their citizens to get professional qualifications. I completely agree with
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bove statement.
To begin
 with, there are many people who have
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otential to do something for their country but they cannot afford their university fees.
Therefore
, they study
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imple
education
 or leave their studies.
Thus
,
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ountry lost their
talent
 who can do something for their country but due to expensive higher
education
 pupils left their studies
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upport their family.
For example
, according to the survey of Cambridge University 40
percent
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 students of Pakistan are not getting university
education
 because of high fees.
Secondly
, due to
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ack of professional
education
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ountry’s economy suffer. The government have higher people from other countries on huge salaries.
Hence
, many countries offering free educations and encourage their citizens to get quality of
education
 and support and work for their countries.
Moreover
, some countries are offering special
trainings
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training
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 and universities degrees to international students to collect international
talent
 and
also
 give them job offers which give
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uge advantage to the authorities and individuals as well in term of
higher good
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higher-good
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talent
 and handsome salaries.
For instance
, China
offer
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offers
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 free medical
education
 to international pupils and after completing
education
 offer a good job as well. To conclude,
education
 is
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an
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mportant thing which is very helpful to boost economic growth and individuals
also
 get many benefits from
education
. A free educational program
are produce
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 more
talent
 who are improving their reputation in the world.
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